i wrote words words that came to mind that flew across my brain translated through my fingers across the screen...i clicked backspace and deleted those words the thoughts that crossed my mind then. now its all a daze gaze back and see ill miss it all sometime soon .... the stones that fell from the sky and crushed the corners of eyes crumpled the paper aimed for the trash the trash in trash couldnt think a wink for tonight tonight im flying im sleeping awake
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and the sinking continues...
i really like teh way u rite...brings some very raw, at times morbid imagery to mind, which i must mention I am not fond of at all. But somehow the way u state it, so matter of fact, subtle yet clearly obvious, is very admirable. Whatever seems to be causing so much pain, I hope gets better real soon.
beknighted: no0o no0o no0o...this wasnt supposed to be morbid or sinkingful or something... daymnit ....even my ramblings are morose .... hmmm o0oh well :P
expressome: thnkx for the visit and comment :)
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